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You have a smile to die for
Beauty beyond compare
I would love to sit beside you
All that flesh exposed and bare

You have a smile to die for
And you really have no shame
Lying on a sunny river bank
Girl you know this isn't a game

You have a smile to die for
My pretty Florida queen
You know I kind of love you
So please don't treat me mean

You have a smile to die for
But I'll still refuse that swim
For Alligators are dangerous
And If you catch me I wont win!
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Number14 in the 100 poem challenge, the theme is smile!
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:iconalittlebitoffaith:
This is good and how I feel when I c this guy I like smile
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 20, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you so much :heart:
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:iconluna-venestus:
OHHH this is soooo good! It's AWESOME! I lovells it! "I'll still refuse that swim for alligators are dangerous and if you catch me i wont win!" I love that line! lol
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 20, 2011  Professional Writer
I'm glad! Thank you :heart:
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~Dedfa Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that is really cool. I like how you hint at her being an alligator :)
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 20, 2011  Professional Writer
I thought it a nice little twist, thank you :heart:
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!jessicavanhelsing Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant :clap:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks! :D
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Mood: Zest !jessicavanhelsing Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! :D
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~OffToNeverland123 Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
awwww!!!!!!!!!!!! sooo cuteeeeee!!!!!!!:heart:
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