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Echoes roll like mist
Faint stirrings of my heart
How to share these feelings
Or change the things that part

Courage fled so long ago
Self confidence a lie
The hammer blows of life
Made hope curl up and die

And yet within your eyes
Can I truly see a seed
Healing in your bosom
And in the words you bleed

I write in cryptic verse
Revealed like finest wine
In every word and stanza
Your radiant beauty shines

Praying needful prayers
I tell my poets tale
The quest to paint your beauty
And how I ever fail

But more than that my love
I clip my feeble wings
Afraid to say I love you
For all that it might bring...
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Pity the poor poet who writes but never lives...
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:iconcyranosdemet:
…a poets life a wandering thing of
dusty roads and mountain springs
and every now and then a lass
who validates the time you pass…


Sounds like in your world that lass would be you :-)
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:iconmagicaljoey:
I love this as it's a love poem with a sad twist, yet it's not cliche. Another great piece from you.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 18, 2012  Professional Writer
That means so much coming from you dear friend :) :heart:
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Mood: Love =DarlingAngel0565 Apr 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Beautiful and amazing as always, poet of many words. You always are able to touch my heart with your words of song. :huggle: :heart:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 18, 2012  Professional Writer
I hope so :huggle: :heart:
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=DarlingAngel0565 Apr 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Always :heart:
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~appa-appa-away Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awh :( A beautiful poem of the poet's tale.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you :) :heart:
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:iconkay-march:
You expose your feelings amazingly both openly and closed only for the ones who really cares understand them...
I can't pity the poet, I don't think he his poor in anyway,
he writes his life in words that no one can steal,
his words are born and bring life, the poet is a creator,
no I can't force myself to believe in it or else I'll too fade and crack into self pity.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 16, 2012  Professional Writer
You write a noble truth that I sometimes overlook. Thank you my dear friend :) :heart:
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