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Snow is gently falling
I feel it's cold caress
My world disappearing
All by ice possessed

Passions embers dying
Love falling from the sky
Screaming out to heaven
The simple question, why?

Helplessly I'm watching
I know my heart must die
A thousand broken shards
No more to rise and fly

The sky is cold and black
The stars so far away
Beneath this long dead moon
My crying soul must stay

I begged the sun, 'don't go'
Yet from my sky she fled
Left me alone and dying
And not a word was said

Love thy blade bites deeply
There's crimson on the snow
And from this bleeding heart
The hurting words shall flow

Tears like rain are falling
To my knee's I fall and beg
Pleading, 'girl don't leave me'
Was it something that I said?

Alone I sit and write
Remembering the dawn
Then an angel whispers
'From pain are poets born'...
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Written while listening to [link] a beautiful and inspiring song.
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~Bloodlilly333 Jun 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful yet again :heart:
I fell in love with the last line.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 23, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you, that means a lot :) :heart:
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~Bloodlilly333 Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome
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:iconrenaiphil:
Very nicely done. Lyrical, and expressive. :)
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 19, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you my friend :)
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:icondelice1941:
Nice read, enjoyed your poem!
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 19, 2012  Professional Writer
That's nice to hear, thank you :) :heart:
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~Katori-93 Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It is magnifisent(?????? I don't know how it's written^^") beautiful, so beautiful, as always~~ Would it be okay with you if I used this as inspiration for a story? It just came to me so suddenly when I was reading this poem. I totally understand if you don't want to, but I just had to ask :----)
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 18, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you :) and of course you can use it for inspiration! :heart:
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~Katori-93 Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure, and thank you~~!! I'll do my best to write the best story I ever have before >____<
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