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How to write a moonbeam
Or golden ray of light
Words to capture beauty
When heaven is in sight?

This poets quill may fail
Unfit for such a task
Though to paint such wonder
God's hand alone I'd ask

Mine eyes light upon thee
I struggle so to breathe
Lost in perfect rapture
Thy side I hate to leave

Child of Aphrodite
Radiant womanhood
Knowest that I love thee
And wouldst hold thee if I could?

Thou my heart hast stolen
I live for thee alone
Bound in these lonely chains
For love must I atone?

For one moment with thee
I would surrender all
To steal a heavenly kiss
And then on sword to fall...
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Sometimes, Romeo and Juliet found, love and life are impossible to reconcile...
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:iconhappyhoshi:
I am seriously blown away by how good this is... if you ever gave this to a girl she would fall over dead with happiness. And then love you forever and ever and ever. Seriously.. well done!
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 23, 2012  Professional Writer
If only love were that simple or that easy. Despite my poetry I'm still lonely...
Anyway,thank you for your kind words beautiful heart :) :heart:
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:iconhappyhoshi:
Haha Yes, if only it were that easy. But honestly, in some cases it can be quite that easy! =P Says me.
You're very welcome. ^_^
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 26, 2012  Professional Writer
That's because you are a beautiful young lady and i'm an old wreck! :)
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:iconhappyhoshi:
Awe... thank you so much. Thats so very kind of you. And even if you are and old wreck as you say, its because of what life did to you.. (I read your deviantID..)But despite everything you have a beautiful kind soul, and from what I can observe you have so much love to give. And you have an amazing talent too. (= <3 So don't bash yourself too much ok?
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 28, 2012  Professional Writer
okay, thank you my dear friend :huggle: :heart:
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:iconhappyhoshi:
You're quite welcome. All my words were sincere. =)
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~Katori-93 Jun 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh and if you publish something I want to know as well!!!!
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:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 19, 2012  Professional Writer
I don't know about being published, but who knows what the future may hold? :) :heart:
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~Katori-93 Jun 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Any publisher would be lucky to have your work to publish<3 But if we're lucky we will both get published some day~~ :----)
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