deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
HTML, 709 bytes
more ▶

Featured in Groups:

Details

March 31, 2012
709 bytes
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 19
Favourites: 23 [who?]

Views: 147 (0 today)
Downloads: 1 (0 today)
[x]
Evening paints its splendor
Across a crystal sky
Stars and moon appearing
As sunbeams fade and die

Comes the sweetest music
Seductive and deceiving
Beckoning the senses
Spirit, slowly yielding

Floating, falling, needing
Heart take wing and fly
Surrendering to passion
Desire a pleading sigh

Come then honeyed darkness
And banish ordained death
Love that lives forever
And life that needs no breath

Drink this scarlet river
For all I am is thine
Death the path to life
Where spirits shall entwine...
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
To be 'undead', a blessing or a curse?
Add a Comment:
 
:icontommyboywood:
~tommyboywood Jan 31, 2013  Professional Writer
a blessing if you believe Revelation 21:3-5. nice work
Reply
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
*Gary-thedreamingpoet Feb 22, 2013  Professional Writer
I am glad you found something of beauty in my poem, thank you.
Reply
:iconnocturnejewel:
It is truly beautiful...it entwines the senses in its perfect immortality.:heart:
Reply
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 10, 2012  Professional Writer
That means so much to me, thank you :) :heart:
Reply
:iconnocturnejewel:
You're very welcome.:rose:
Reply
:iconice-dutchess:
~Ice-Dutchess Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Curse. To be forever in a position where you can neither live nor die would be tortuous. But it's still beautiful anyhow. Plenty of metaphor.
Reply
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 7, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you :) :heart:
Reply
:icon12redroses:
" Come then honeyed darkness" I can almost taste it. :)
This is magnificent. :heart:
Reply
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 7, 2012  Professional Writer
You make me blush! Thank you beautiful one :) :heart:
Reply
:icon12redroses:
You're welcome. =) :heart:
Reply
Add a Comment: