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On blue savannah plains
Below a crimson sky
Sings an azure willow
She's simply asking 'why?'

Among the yellow buds
Lay broken hearts so red
Each so very wounded
They surely must be dead

Blue grass bends in sorrow
Green parrots sing sad songs
Elven folk stand crying
For a world so full of wrong

Sunbeams kiss the dying
The moon sends healing dust
Angels sew the deep wounds
Of those who gave in trust

Faery folk bring new wings
And very special gifts
Eyes that see a thousand worlds
And words men's souls to lift

Healed, these hearts are rising
Composing ballads for the stars
Newborn poets flying
With such beauty in their scars...
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Written while listening to [link] Part of the two hundred poem challenge (Number 22, rebirth) and dedicated to my poet friends, thank you for your inspiration, love and friendship :)
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=Ninefiftin Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The last three strophes are perfect...
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jan 8, 2013  Professional Writer
Thank you my friend, that means a lot :)
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=Ninefiftin Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
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Hello,

How are you?

Feature here:
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Happy New Year!
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Dec 31, 2012  Professional Writer
Hi, I'm fine thank you. Thank you so much for the feature, I'm honored that you enjoyed my poem so much and happy new year to you my dear friend :)
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~ancientfire33 Dec 17, 2012  Student Writer
Just amazing, "with such beauty in their scars"...

Such as mystical and fantastical world you have created, I understand for as I am fighting through depression its feels as if that whole amazing process you describe so beautifully in these poem comes to life! :)

Hopefully my heart will heal and rise, composing ballads for the stars! ^^
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Dec 19, 2012  Professional Writer
I'm glad you find it beautiful, and sorry to to hear that you know the bleak hand of depression too. I hope and pray that you feel brighter soon and that your heart flies on eagles wings :) :heart:
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~ancientfire33 Dec 20, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you and yes I am fighting it everyday, but at least now I have learned to value life as it comes...thanks to it I have grown so much and learned who I am! :)
It taught me never to judge, yourself or anyone, because you can never know their true colors! :D
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Dec 26, 2012  Professional Writer
You are very wise. People are like icebergs, we see only what's on the surface. Seeing what lies beneath is the most important thing we can ever do. True beauty, true kindness, the ability to truly love, all these things lie deep within a person and until we take the time to know a person we know nothing of them.
I hope your Christmas has been wonderful! :)
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~ancientfire33 Dec 27, 2012  Student Writer
Yes, it is true and sadly at my age a lot of people wear fake masks to try to "fit in" and impress people... Why, it is really hard to find someone that is pure and true! :(

Thank you and I hope you had a wonderful Christmas too! :D
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