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Sands of oblivion
In our hourglass of time
Pouring without mercy
A trickle so sublime

Life so very precious
We often seem to waste
Missing opportunities
The wine of joy to taste

Will the page we're writing
Be marked with sad regret
Longing and not living
With doubt and fear beset

Journey then in wonder
Live and love and play
Use each precious moment
And treasure every day...

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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
A lovely piece. Wonderful job.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 30, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you my friend :)
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~BellaBugia Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The last stanza wraps it all up really well. This is inspirational!
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Apr 7, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you:) :heart:
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~BellaBugia Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Love it! It has a wonderfully positive almost upbeat feel to it. <3 Take your own advice, yeah?
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:iconkay-march:
Time pass so quickly.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Mar 27, 2012  Professional Writer
To quickly...
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:iconkay-march:
yes, so enjoy life as long as it lasts.
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:icondelice1941:
Really nice rhythm going on here, pleasure to read.
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