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Unluckily I know misfortune
Intimately and well
We've lived together all my life
And to be honest it's been hell

Seriously I know misfortune
My childhood was a joke
I didn't ever laugh a lot
My little heart was broke

I really know misfortune
She brought me lots of pain
Introduced me to Arthritis
Life has never been the same

Me and my misfortune
Thought my marriage built on rock
Then she took my love away
That gave me quite a shock

Dear old friend misfortune
It's time to part our ways
You have other fish to fry
And I no longer want to play...

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Number 13 in the 100 poem challenge, the theme is 'misfortune', ah, I know her so well!

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:iconloverofwars:
There is some thing about this poem that makes my insides squirm. AND i kind of like it <3
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
lol, well I'm glad then! Thank you :heart:
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:iconloverofwars:
oh good, and your welcome. :)
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Mood: Joy !jessicavanhelsing Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:clap:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
:heart:
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Mood: Zest !jessicavanhelsing Oct 18, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome! :D
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~Gina96 Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
you're a great poet, you know that?
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
I don't feel like I'm a great poet to be honest, but thank you very,very much :heart:
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~OffToNeverland123 Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Beatiful:heart:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Oct 18, 2011  Professional Writer
Thank you :heart:
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