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The seasons come and go
But some things never change
Love like ribbons bleeding
Simple words upon a page

Close my eyes and see you
Your echo will not fade
Memories silken soft
For in your light I bathed

Like the sweetest angel
With healing in your wings
You came to me in dreams
And led this heart to sing

Unsurpassed your beauty
Radiance shines within
How could I not worship
And how can love be sin?

Can't you hear me calling
Or see these falling tears
This heart for you will yearn
Through all my passing years

My love will never fail
You live within my heart
But sometimes I feel lonely
And my world falls apart

And so I bleed these words
Crimson mixed with rain
Magic in the telling
That seems to ease my pain...
:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Written while listening to Annie Lennox singing 'Whiter Shade of Pale' and thinking about love... and me
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~CrimsonSmolder Jun 3, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Simple, Pure, and Strong
Touched my Heart ~Beautiful :)
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Jun 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Your comment touched my heart and made me smile, thank you my friend :)
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~CrimsonSmolder Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You Are Most Welcome :)
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Mood: Love `TeaPhotography May 26, 2012  Professional General Artist
Annie Lennox is awesome...
music is very inspiring. :aww:
Your words are truly very impressive, and I've always been impressed with what I've read in your galleries...

and just.. WOW:

And so I bleed these words
Crimson mixed with rain


Just a small example! :heart:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet May 30, 2012  Professional Writer
I can't tell you how much your words mean to me. I try to capture beauty in my words and if just one person see's something of that then all the effort is worthwhile. Thank you :) :heart:
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:icondelice1941:
Beautiful to read from beginning to end.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet May 21, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you my friend, that means a lot :)
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~Aethrios May 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It takes a special kind of understanding to be able to articulate the brokenness that can exist in love. That it's no cure-all, that life and problems still go on, regardless of how you feel about someone else, and how they feel about you.

Thank you for writing this.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet May 21, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you for such a kind comment :)
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~Aethrios May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You're deserving of it... welcome!
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