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October 30, 2012
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Hope and broken dreams

Journal Entry: Tue Oct 30, 2012, 6:25 AM


Love it always beckons
Forever out of reach
Like the warm blue ocean
That laps the golden beach

There my soul it wanders
This shore of broken dreams
Living in the shadows
Of 'ifs' and  'might have been's'

Foolish heart stop wishing
Release me from this thirst
Of all the hurts and pains
Loneliness is the worst

To hear your voice I hunger
To see your face I yearn
Pain beyond enduring
My heart will you not learn?

How can I stop dreaming
Or learn to act my age
When this poetic spirit
Pours my heart upon the page

Grey gives way to sunshine
Hope lifts its dying head
I find a grain of comfort
In something that you've said

Sitting on the golden sand
I look out to the sea
rolling blue enchantment
Bids me "dream of what might be"




:icongary-thedreamingpoet:
Written while listening to [link]
It is part of my 200 poem challenge and a little about my hope for better things...
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Mood: Love ~WalkinginDreamlight Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful poem.

I loved the free flowing nature of each verse.

Nice imagery in the words.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Nov 20, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you, you words are deeply appreciated.
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:icondelice1941:
This is lovely to read, it flows so gently from one image to another:rose:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Nov 7, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you my fellow poet :)
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:iconkatragoness:
wow. I absolutely love this piece. <3 it's so beautiful and says so much. :)
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Nov 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Your words mean a lot, thank you :)
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*TheDarkenedBride Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
to act your age? you mean 16? :P
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Nov 1, 2012  Professional Writer
:rofl: Did I tell you I love you! :D
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Mood: Joy *TheDarkenedBride Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconthinkingplz: hmm, let me think about it... I guess now you did :D
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