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September 12, 2012
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First Love

Journal Entry: Wed Sep 12, 2012, 8:04 AM


When the Sun has faded
And stars no longer shine
Memories shall linger
And pay no heed to time

Your smile left me breathless
Your face, I see it still
That 'accidental' touch
That gave me such a thrill

Those sleepless, lonely nights
That ushered loves first tears
The beating of my heart
Whenever you appeared

Innocence surrendered
Into your tender arms
First love lasts forever
We hold it like a charm

I will not forget you
You taught me, oh so much
Still my sweet beloved
I hunger for your touch...








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I still remember...
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:iconkay-march:
For quite some time I don't say this to you, I have to say it again... I read Byron, Yeats and Shelly, I have a 4th place there for you...
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Sep 23, 2012  Professional Writer
I am honored beautiful one, though I feel I should share that place with you :) :heart:
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:iconkay-march:
Wow... it will be my pleasure!
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:iconnostrovelle:
This is truly amazing. You've captured that special moment in such a way that very few writers can achieve.
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Sep 17, 2012  Professional Writer
Thank you my dear friend :)
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:icondelice1941:
Pleasure to read, enjoy my Sunday reading your poems!
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Sep 16, 2012  Professional Writer
I am honored, thank you dear friend and fellow poet :)
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=DarlingAngel0565 Sep 15, 2012  Professional Writer
This is beautiful! I love it :heart:
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*Gary-thedreamingpoet Sep 15, 2012  Professional Writer
I am pleased and honored beautiful one :) :heart:
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=DarlingAngel0565 Sep 19, 2012  Professional Writer
:huggle: :blackrose: :rose:
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